My Attempts at writing
Very good acrostic, but I don't think you need "found" in the last line ... reads much better with just "peace within" .. because "hope" does "inspires" "peace within".
Very crisp and neat Acrostic.You may consider the suggestion by Amias.It would make it crispier!! Well done.
@Amias- you're right! I'll change it... thanks!
Very good acrostic, but I don't think you need "found" in the last line ... reads much better with just "peace within" .. because "hope" does "inspires" "peace within".
ReplyDeleteVery crisp and neat Acrostic.You may consider the suggestion by Amias.It would make it crispier!! Well done.
ReplyDelete@Amias- you're right! I'll change it... thanks!
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