Saturday, June 19, 2010

Worship

Worries
Obscure
Reason
Silent prayer
Hope
Inspires
Peace within *
 
Prompt 11, Acrostic Only

*edited: Peace found within
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  1. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)June 19, 2010 at 10:07 PM

    Very good acrostic, but I don't think you need "found" in the last line ... reads much better with just "peace within" .. because "hope" does "inspires" "peace within".

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  2. SarasJune 20, 2010 at 5:20 AM

    Very crisp and neat Acrostic.You may consider the suggestion by Amias.It would make it crispier!! Well done.

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  3. nandiniJune 20, 2010 at 9:08 AM

    @Amias- you're right! I'll change it... thanks!

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